From 85332a5fb574d45994adb7303fe98cb52345e3fc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Son NK <>
Date: Wed, 9 Sep 2020 22:14:06 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] improve onboarding email subjects
---
job_runner.py | 6 +++---
templates/emails/com/onboarding/pgp.html | 4 ++--
templates/emails/com/onboarding/send-from-alias.html | 4 ++--
3 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/job_runner.py b/job_runner.py
index 8ec6582b..348bcba1 100644
--- a/job_runner.py
+++ b/job_runner.py
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ def new_app():
def onboarding_send_from_alias(user):
send_email(
user.email,
- f"Do you know you can send emails to anyone from your alias?",
+ f"Do you know you can send emails from your alias?",
render("com/onboarding/send-from-alias.txt", user=user),
render("com/onboarding/send-from-alias.html", user=user),
)
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ def onboarding_pgp(user):
def onboarding_browser_extension(user):
send_email(
user.email,
- f"Do you know you can create aliases without leaving the browser?",
+ f"Have you tried SimpleLogin Chrome/Firefox extensions and Android/iOS apps?",
render("com/onboarding/browser-extension.txt", user=user),
render("com/onboarding/browser-extension.html", user=user),
)
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ def onboarding_browser_extension(user):
def onboarding_mailbox(user):
send_email(
user.email,
- f"Do you know SimpleLogin can manage several email addresses?",
+ f"Do you know you can have multiple mailboxes on SimpleLogin?",
render("com/onboarding/mailbox.txt", user=user),
render("com/onboarding/mailbox.html", user=user),
)
diff --git a/templates/emails/com/onboarding/pgp.html b/templates/emails/com/onboarding/pgp.html
index 3d95cc1a..d0518450 100644
--- a/templates/emails/com/onboarding/pgp.html
+++ b/templates/emails/com/onboarding/pgp.html
@@ -10,13 +10,13 @@
{% endcall %}
{% call text() %}
- Without PGP, emails are stored in plaintext leaving your email service able to read your emails:
+ Without PGP, emails are stored in plaintext leaving your email service able to read your emails.
{% endcall %}
{% call text() %}
- With PGP enabled, SimpleLogin encrypts your emails with your public key before forwarding to your mailbox:
+ With PGP enabled, SimpleLogin encrypts your emails with your public key before forwarding to your mailbox.
{% endcall %}
diff --git a/templates/emails/com/onboarding/send-from-alias.html b/templates/emails/com/onboarding/send-from-alias.html
index 01c6335c..d8728fe6 100644
--- a/templates/emails/com/onboarding/send-from-alias.html
+++ b/templates/emails/com/onboarding/send-from-alias.html
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
{% call text() %}
If you want to reply to an email, just hit "Reply"
- and your response will come from your alias.
+ and the response will come from your alias. Your personal email address stays hidden.
{% endcall %}
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
{% endcall %}
{% call text() %}
- 1. First click Send Email on the alias you want to send email from.
+ 1. First click Send Email on the alias you want to send emails from.
{% endcall %}